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Bullamakanka is a bent and twisted old man who does not have a cat. He does have five goannas though and a possum who lives in the wall. None of them help with the writing, the lazy buggers.

Love Music

November 3rd 2007 13:21
My love asleep I do treasure

And when awake I do pleasure

The curves of her body are divine

Softly caress her neck so fine

To my thrust and withdrawal

She responds, with her all

Lost in my love's joyous singing


I thrust and thrust with all my being

For an hour, or two, sometimes more

We share our love, a sea with no shore

One, last, slow thrust and moan of delight

I pack my cello and turn out the light
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Comment by Lily

November 4th 2007 01:53
We share our love, a sea with no shore

perfectly placed your Cello be...
ended far too quickly for me



~Lily


Comment by Bullamakanka

November 4th 2007 10:30
Hi Lily

Short and sweet. I have been plagued by the use of few words.

Thank you for your reading.

Bullmakanka

Comment by Ash

November 5th 2007 10:51
I love it Bullamankanka

And had to laugh at Lily`s comment too! ~chuckle~ brilliant!

Ash

Comment by Bullamakanka

November 6th 2007 10:07
Glad you liked it Ash. It was a twenty minute poem.

Was given the word "cello" and had to write a poem about it.


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