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Why Write?

November 1st 2006 13:17
Why Write?

That's the question I was asked early on in my quest for a diploma in Professional Writing and Editing.

The thing is that I started writing maybe eight or ten years earlier. Mostly articles about building and solar power.

My first article was, well, a disaster. The editor re-wrote it. He had to and I don't blame him. But the point is that he thought story was worth the rewrite. When I saw the difference I knew that I would have to improve my skills base. I did the best I could. I accepted all criticism with a brave heart.

Then I had a chance to get my diploma. On the first day of class

"Why Write" was the question.

My answer.

The Boy

Once upon a time there was a boy who was very creative

He lived at a time when children

had imagination

As he grew up times changed and the boy was told

he should be more serious,

go to college,

get a job

He was told that art was ok,

but only as

a hobby

He was told that only those

with a college education

could get a job

The boy did not believe

what he was told

became a welder

It was work, it paid the bills

it was creative

Over the years the boy tried many things

He did sculpture and leather work

but never sandals

or hand bags

People said that’s nice but can you

make a living from it?

The boy did not care

The boy made jewellery, hats, clothing and furniture

He made life

interesting

The boy’s life went on and over the years

the boy created

many things.

He created two children


with imaginations.

This should be enough

he thought

But the children grew up

left home

The boy created a house

another life and

new dreams

He kept putting one foot

in front of

the other

The boy knew that he had

somewhere to go

but not the road He followed the road anyway

It twisted and turned back

on itself

Often passing the same place

time and again

The boy had to keep going because the road

was in front

of him

There was no road behind

Onward forward

No returning

For a while the boy thought

that he created

the road

Then he thought that the road

created him

Nobody asked what

the road

thought

The boy decided that he

created the road

that created him

with every step

The boy created grey hair and age

He created aches and pains

He created his life

But it was not enough

The boy had

more to give

more to create

The sun comes up

The boy gets up as well

Feet on the road

Create the day

But the boy wants more

The boy has things to say

Worlds to create

Worlds to create him

So much to do

So much unsaid

Words fail him

No!

Words flail him

drive him

create him

The boy

must

write

G Ghio, 2003
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Comment by Ahmed

November 1st 2006 16:58
Heh, yeah, can't say I blame Mr. Editor really. It takes heart to accept criticism for something like your writing, but ultimately it helps you be a better writer. If you don't accept criticism, how iwll you improve? Unless of course you think you are perfect as you are...

Comment by Bullamakanka

November 2nd 2006 09:53
It's called being precious about your work. It does nothing for ones reputation. Being precious about your work tells editors and publishers that you lack professionalism.

Comment by Ahmed

November 2nd 2006 10:53
Wouldn't be surprised, I don't think people like to hire others who think they are too good to be true.

Comment by K.L. Almeroth

December 3rd 2006 04:21

Hi George,

I love this post. My favourite.

K.L.

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